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Consumer Goods
Pepsodent
The Mistakes

The Mistakes

Pepsodent

Created by Claude Hopkins

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The Mistakes
Swipe Details
Company
Pepsodent
Created by
Claude Hopkins
Type
Print Ad
Industry
Consumer Goods
Business Model
B2B2C
Swiped on:April 4, 2020

Marketing Insights

WHY IT WORKS: This ad leverages problem-agitation-solution framework by immediately identifying a universal fear ("The Mistakes That ruined millions of teeth") and positioning Pepsodent as the scientific solution. The fear-based headline coupled with specific enemy identification ("Film—the great enemy") creates urgency while the 10-day free trial removes all purchase barriers.

COPYWRITING TECHNIQUES:

  • Problem amplification through dramatic statistics ("millions of teeth ruined", "millions of germs breed in it")
  • Enemy identification strategy naming "Film" as the specific villain to combat
  • Scientific authority positioning with "Dental science has now found two effective film combatants"
  • Risk reversal with "10-Day Tube Free" coupon offer
  • Benefit stacking showing multiple advantages ("glistening teeth", "whiter teeth", "combat tartar")

DESIGN PRINCIPLES:

  • Visual storytelling with before/after implied through the happy couple image
  • Hierarchical typography with bold headline creating immediate impact
  • Strategic use of subheadings to break up dense copy ("Film—the great enemy", "Results quick and amazing")
  • Coupon placement at bottom following natural reading flow
  • High contrast black text on white for maximum readability

PSYCHOLOGICAL TRIGGERS:

  • Fear appeal through dental health consequences ("ruined millions of teeth", "breeds decay")
  • Social proof via aspirational imagery of attractive, smiling couple
  • Authority bias using "Dental science" and "Leading dentists everywhere endorse"
  • Loss aversion by emphasizing what happens without proper dental care
  • Reciprocity principle with free trial offer creating obligation to try
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